Painting by James Christensen
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Poet Rummager 
“Throbbing melody/stops with a note unfinished” Ahh, sigh…..music to my ears and the heart of love is pierced. Bon Jovi’s “Shot Through the Heart” popped into my head reading that!
Although, and I hate to be picky, hahaha…but the pronouns in haiku one confused me. Sorry to be so fussy! haha *sheepish grin*
“and she promised
never would he leave.”
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I groove to Bon Jovi every chance I get! Yes, the last haiku was Mani’s masterpiece. I love it, too.
Ah, just read slower then, my love 😉 Thank you for visiting and commenting. I love to hear your thoughts. xo
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@Poet Rummager: Your page is put together nicely. Do you have any space on your page for adding a few of my works? or possibly a different website that includes works of authors you like/ work with ? You can also find me on Facebook:Tevin Ponder -T. Ponder
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Hi Tevin, You are welcome to turn in two to three haiku poems to me: yayrperez@yahoo.com. Please make sure that the poems are in the 5-7-5 format, and all three have a similar theme.
Thank you for visiting, and I look forward to reading your poetry.
Rose
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Yep. I reread slower. So, she promised that he would never leave? That still confuses me. ;o) Explain plz? I’m having a “doh” moment.
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She promised herself that he would never leave, thus she stabbed him. Haiku, as you know, is an unforgiving form of poetry. We are limited in our descriptions.
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haha, I know, it totally just sunk in as you were posting your reply!!! omg, I’m totally freaked out right now!!
I’m too pretty for this drama! Bahahahahaha! Kidding…
Seriously, wow. Very intense and dark! And she didn’t just threaten as we hear about. She was not messing around.
I love it more now that I understand it! xo
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Far too pretty! xo
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Nah! Haha, an inside joke, shared only with the inner circle! And you are way gorgeouser than me! 💙
Have a lovely day!
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Lol. Hey, you, too! 🙂 xo
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Oh, crap. I just got it….holy fuqtards!!! That just sent CHILLS down the ol’ spineroonie!! Damn, girls! wow….just wow! 🥀 🥀 🥀
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No worries! 😀 You’re a hoot, and I do love your honesty.
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lolz! I’m a little slow on the uptake in the a.m.! This was tragic, too. Sad…but beautiful. You guys amaze me.
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❤
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The two of you work very well together. I had a more difficult time determining who wrote what in this collaboration than any of the previous ones. Great haiku poems and the painting is beautiful.
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Mani wrote two of them. If you guess correctly, I’ll give you a surprise. Guess!! ❤
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The second and last?
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I’m looking forward to Rose’s reply!
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Me and you both…
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Lol. I forgot I mentioned one of ’em in my comment. Mani’s masterpieces were actually #3 and #5. 👏👏 You got one right! Thanks for guessing, Og. 💋
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Damn it. I wanted my surprise. Just as well, knowing you. 🙂
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Haha!! You would’ve loved it, whatcha talkin’ about? 😆 There will be more added next week, so let’s see if you can guess better. We may have to get your two favorite things for you if you win. 😜
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Tea and…?
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Yes! Lol. Oh, that makes 3 things, huh? 🤔
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You write very well together. The tragic ending reminded me a bit of Romeo and Juliet, except with Juliet stabbing Romeo too.
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Yes, bravo, my darling bag head friend! — a modern sinister twist to the tragic love story that was the inspiration. 🌹
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you just delivered another good haiku poem to your readers and fans like me and in other words sky is blue..:)wonderful poetess ..<3
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V! You love to butter your ladies here on WP and then you leave for weeks. Hope you stay longer this time around. Many thanks. 😘
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This time i’all try and stick for long time I assure you that 😊
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Interesting and beautiful as always, Rose
xo ❤
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I appreciate your sweet words, lovely Monica! ❤👑
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Fantastic work by you both. I feel (deliberate or otherwise) references to Shakespeare threaded throughout. Tragedy. Nice.
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Ha! You read me so well, Stephen. Deliberate it was. I rarely do anything on accident. Thank you darling. 🌹🍪🥂
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Brilliant , disturbing, Sad, amazing work.
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You described my week! 😀 Thank you.
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An excellent collaboration Rose.
The third Haiku is my favourite. 😃
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Thanks darkling! Mani’s haiku is brilliant. 😊
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Thank you for the mention! So happy that James Christensen paintings inspired this beautiful haiku story.The opening haiku is absolutely stunning.xxxx
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I also mention you to my cats and rabbit. You’re more popular than St. Francis in our household. 😋 Aw, thank you, Lady Inese. I hope you’re well rested from your holiday. 💋❤
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Thank you sweetheart! I so love to learn you have cats and a rabbit. Thank you for being so kind ❤
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I agree–a Shakespearian tragedy. 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by! 🙂
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Of course, dear Rose! 🙂
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Amazing haikus 💕
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Many thanks, sir and future doctor. 🌹
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It’s so kind of you to call me that but I’m “Mihir” only .. “sir” is too much for me !! We all are learning creatures, finding peace in words !!
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This is so dark. Excellent ^_^ ❤
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💖💋
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😀
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You and Mani are a deadly combination!
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Don’t ask us where we hide our weapons! Lol.
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Where?…wait! Never mind.
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We can’t tell you — our knives would kill us! 🔪🔪
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I hate when that happens.
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You’ve done it so wonderfully, Rose ❤ The five haiku poems together paints a picture, a complete story… just loving it… ❤ ❤
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..and, did I mention the choice of painting is just perfect!
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Reblogged this on Scattered Thoughts and commented:
Rose, an amazing story-teller, poet, artist and a wonderful human being, has started a series of collaborations on her blog with haiku poets. Here is our presentation, five haiku poems together.
Read carefully to discover the story in this haiku poems…
Thank you, dear Rose, ❤
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Love can find its way even in a darker place as sometimes is the mind. n_n
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The mind can hold some very dark thoughts, indeed. Sometimes I shine a mental flashlight at my brain to locate the cobwebs and scare the shadows away.
I love your poetic words. ❤
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I love your poetic words, I am so happy to be able to come back to read you again. /n.n/
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😘
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