Short film by FlyTrapMan – Click HERE to visit and follow his blog!
In the stream, the reflection of the moon can be seen.
If I drink the water, would I shine brighter?
If I were to submerge into the glowing depths,
would I then emerge an incandescent me?
Allow light to course through my veins
where only positive energy would remain.
Moon dust, cover the emptiness
that hovers in my soul.
Fill it with sparkles; erasing all
misery and turmoil.
Make me believe
with all my heart, I, too, can
be a beacon in the dark.
Poet Rummager 
Beautiful words and video
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Oh, Pupazzovi, grazie! Fly’s film is remarkable. You make me smile 🙂
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Great reflection…. wonderful poem! 🙂
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Ah, nice pun! Thanks so much, Iris. The moon’s reflection is a grand one. 😍
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Loved it. Very sick – and by sick I mean awesome.
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I appreciate you visiting and reading! Thank you — I think 😀
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You’re welcome. The poetry was sublime and that movie was right on target for the season. A delicate balance – mastered. xo
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I love your words. My poem was written after watching Fly’s film, so yes, there lies a balance in words and visual. All my thanks! xo
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You already are matey 😀
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Oh, I just melted. Thanks Josh! 😍
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Hooray 😀
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I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed this film! Thank you so much for sharing it, Josh. xo
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I’m glad you did ^_^
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Powerful, Rose. Truly great poem.
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Many thanks, Oggy! Your visits and support are priceless.
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Beautiful poem, Rose
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Thank you very much, Sir Knight!
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I love this–haunting video and poetry. Beautiful!
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I love your visits and comments! Thanks a bunch, dear Merril.
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Awww. You’re welcome, dear Rose. 🙂
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As one of the other commenters said, that’s a powerful poem, Rose. Of course, I would say you’re already something of a beacon in the darkness of WordPress! 😀
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I agree with you..
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That’s so sweet of you to say, BunK! Thank you!! There are times when I don’t feel very radiant then I visit your jolly blog, and I light up again. 😍
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Thank, Rose! I appreciate that. 😀
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The cricket orchestra returns! Thanks for sharing my water crescent movie — I never expected it would inspire you to write a lucid expression. Your words certainly added a distinct and visceral depth, which granted the film a dimension worth exploring.
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I am enthralled by your work and find inspiration there. The crickets added such mystique and charm to the brilliant moon — truly superb. Many thanks!
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The crickets did all the work \”/
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An awesome poem Rose,
and a great piece of film from Matt.
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Your generous comments always make me shine! Thank you very much, Alan. Yes, Fly’s film is as radiant as the moon.
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Beautiful poetry PR, love the imagery and the internal rhymes. The questioning, yearning, and pleading of the poem is touching.
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Your comment is as beautiful as your poetry! Thank you for taking the time to read my work.
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I would follow you anywhere
Even in darkness
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I may scare you by jumping out of your closet, but I would never lead you into darkness, darling Shel! Haha!! May the moon find you warm, healthy, and loved. ❤
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Thank you Rose
But the darkness could be fun
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I agree! Let us — you and me — go on a scavenger monster hunt in the moonlight. Very fun, indeed!!
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Yes let see what developes
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Romantic
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Bravo. This is one of your best. Missed you.
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Aw, my world just got a little brighter! Hello!! Are you seeing more clearly these days? I’ve missed you, too!
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I can’t see clearly even thought the rain is gone. No surgery date yet. I took s two week break. Went stir crazy too. Missed you and Donovan too.
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I’m glad to hear there’s no rain in your health forecast! I would go stir crazy with two weeks away, too. You’re back I hope for a long spell. Believe me, your absence was felt in the WP community. xo
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Your words ARE a beacon in the dark xx
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I cannot tell you how much your comment means to me. Thanks Christy! xo
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❤ ❤ this Rose ❤
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My dear poet, In my opinion you shine brightly as you are and you do not have to drink the pond water and spoil the moon to improve on that. xx
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Ah, not only do I take a drink from your captivating words, but I take a big gulp, as well! I’m touched. Thank you!! xo
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Beautiful is the only words to describe this
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Much appreciated, Morgan!
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Thank you for the re-blog, Joe!
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Really love this poem.
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Thank you, dear Caw Caw! 😍
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Many thanks,Penney!
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Thank you for alwas a great blog
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Thank you for a great blog
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You are a beacon! I just took pictures of a lighthouse. Will post them soon and link to your blog 🙂 Halloween edition 😉
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Thank you very much, Inese! I’m excited to see your lighthouse post Halloween edition!! 😉 ❤
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Isn’t easy, that one, but I will do my best to put it up. 🙂 ❤
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Lovely, Rose.
Kat
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Thanks Kat! I’m happy for your visit.
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My pleasure.
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Really enjoyed this 🙂
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Thanks Wajdi!
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Loved the video by FTM!! Your poem is so intense, Rose…just perfect! ❤
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Fly’s video did all the work 😊 Thank you so much, lovely friend. 💋
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❤ ….
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I read this again love it even more the second time around
Simply beautiful Rose
You are a source of light……..
Never doubt
Just shine unto the morrow
Sheldon
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I appreciate your support and lovely words, Shel! Have a fabulous week. xo
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Paint the town red for me Rose
monster style
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Stellar darkness, Rose. Thank you. ^~^
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