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You want only me
despite my coldness.
No softness do I convey.
You keep me close –
stroking me in endless foreplay.
When I’m empty,
I tell you –
demanding to be filled.
Stop my hunger.
I whimper.
You quiver.
I’ve broken your will.
You squeeze me.
I scream.
My sounds reverberating
in your heart,
in your ears.
You need me always near.
Here in your hand is where I belong.
There’s no one else who gives so much.
Keep me loaded and always ready.
I’m the one –
your ever trusty,
never unwavering,
sexy six shot,
double revolver,
.44 Magnum cartridge
gun!
Meet an unusual man with a penchant for danger and a deadly obsession by clicking
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Loved it.
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That’s what most men I know say about their guns. Thank you!
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A very deadly obsession indeed! Loved the twist in the last line 😉
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Hi Somali! Deadly indeed — the one who holds the gun demands the respect… or else. I love twists! Thanks so much. xo
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Happiness is a warm gun, since I’ve heard 🙂
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Happiness depends on who’s holding the warm gun. 😉
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*So I’ve heard*.. auto correct got me again!
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Just a bullet graze; you’ll be fine!
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So deadly…
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And sexy. 😉
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Indeed..
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I love fanning the hammer!
–FlyTrapMan–
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I’ve always wanted to do that! You don’t even like guns, I thought? Have you ever watched a badass Clint Eastwood Western? He does that a lot in his old movies. 🙌 🔫
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Guns are too loud. And they smell. I watched a few Clint Eastwood movies, but not too many.
–FlyTrapMan–
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The Dirty Harry ones are my guilty pleasure. I also liked The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly.
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You know Mother Superior jump the gun
I can’t claim
But it has been said
Which is my experience
Happiness is a warm gum
Momma
The Sheldon Perspective
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Mother Superior carries her warm gun where the sun doesn’t shine, but it’s okay — Father O’Malley blessed it. Lol. I love where my mind goes when you drop by. Bang, baby! 🔫
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You do it to me Rose
I can’t do it with everyone
It’s not the same
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Well, it takes a twisted mind, darling, and I’ve got that. So nice to meet a counterpart in you!
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Very clever. I loved the way this unfolded. After reading it I had to read it again with new eyes.
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I’m glad it unfolded the way I was hoping it would. Whenever I put on new eyes, I always have to wait for them to fit my sockets — sometimes it takes weeks! 😀 Thank you, Stephen. 👁👁
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Excellent write. Powerful written.
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Thank you! I hope your eyes are better. xo Well, it’s a powerful gun — Dirty Harry would attest to that 😉
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Lol
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An excellent post Rose.
Love the twisted ending.
Never saw it coming. 🔫🔫
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YES! 🎈 🎏 🎀 🎊 🎉 Surprise!!! Lol. Thank you my darkest gem of a friend. 💎
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ha, ha,…your ending surprised me truly…Brilliant minds make brilliant poems.
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Yay! Surprise, surprise!! 🎈 🎏 🎁 🎊 🎉
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Clever 😉
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It takes someone clever to get it, so you are clever, too! xo Thank you.
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So kind 😛 Well, great poem anyways 😀
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A bang final, a weapon demands power : )
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Bang, bang Francis! Thank you and have a happy evening. xo
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The twist in the end… 😀 😀 All the way I was thinking of something else… 😛
You are wonderful… ❤
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Thanks a bunch Mani! I’m happy the poem turned out the way I’d hoped it would. Your new profile pic is lovely, btw! ❤
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Awww…thanks a ton, dear Rose… ❤
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Guns…I have mixed feelings on them. I prefer blades, they don’t run out of bullets and are much more personal. Still, Guns get the job done and generally end it all quickly and I like and respect that.
It is a feeling of power shooting them, but I feel it false. Usually guns are used by cowards. I’m not speaking on those defending themselves, just that there are far more used by criminals for less than ideal reasonings.
At any rate, I love the poem and in regards to the link, I’m still laughing about Big Boy. Might be my favorite character. Xp
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Yes, for the most part, I agree with you about guns. My husband has a Glock, but he’s in the military, so it makes sense he’d have a gun. We both know where it is in case something happens.
Big Boy the bear! Haha. Yeah, stick around, and you’ll meet more characters from the mind of Fly. Thank you for your well developed comments — I appreciate you taking the time. I’ll visit your excellent blog later tonight. xo
~PR
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I consider military or former military as those defending themselves and others. So I totally get the gun thing there, and I’m all for gun rights, so don’t want that being misinterpreted.
Oh, and yes “Big Boy The Mad Circus Bear” is my favorite thus far. I can’t help it. I like the sheer randomness and the brutality. ^_^ Sorry I didn’t get back sooner. Yesterday was an extremely long day (in a good way) and I crashed from like 6 pm till 5:30 this morning.
Looking forward to Friday.
Thanks for the reply and the great poetry.
Cheers! ^_^
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Oh, I understood what you were saying about guns. No worries.
Anything “long” is usually a good thing 😉 Now, with all that rest, you won’t run out of energy writing your masterpieces!
Thanks so much, Sin. xo
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Haha! I appreciate your humor. Xp It’s been a long and exhausting week, but the week is almost over and yesterday we got really good news in terms of starting processes to get out of our present living situation.
Hopefully things continue on the up and up, and it’s Thursday so I’m sure I can push through being Friday is right around the corner. I am glad you think I write masterpieces. That is high praise and I appreciate it. I am quite sure sometimes these things quite literally write themselves.
I’m not sure when I’ll have the next entry up but it will be today sometime. Kind of waiting for these inspections that could happen any time this week or maybe happened yesterday (We may never know). Xp Such a drain when you have an inspection that could happen anytime during a given week.
Anywho, I hope you are having an amazing day and I’m hoping in the near future to have more energy than anyone here has ever witnessed me having. (That will even be before Coffee). Xp
Cheers! ^_^
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I’ll keep my fingers crossed regarding your inspection! It does sound frustrating.
Well, I shall miss your writings and will wait in anticipation for your return!
xo
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We aren’t moving immediately so no worries, but when we do, I’ll give a heads up so souls will know I may disappear during the transition. Thank you, we could use all the good luck we can get. Living here isn’t the best. 😉
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Clever masturbatory imagery
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Hahaha!! Ah, best comment I’ve received all week. You may borrow this poem whenever you’d like, Derrick 😉
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This reminded me a little of one of those great old Anglo-Saxon poetic riddles we were asked to read at university. I could tell you were describing something, but I was sure what it was going to be until the twist at the end. 🙂
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Oh, thanks my sweetest bag headed friend! I’m glad you stuck around long enough to find the answer to the riddle. ❤
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Well, I had a gun at my head. 🙂
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Haha! Oh, you clever cutie, you!! I would pinch your paper cheeks if I could. ❤
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Hee Hee! Thank you! 🙂
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A l’il bit too sexy for me 😉
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Really! 😀 Hmm, I always was under the impression that nothing was too sexy for you. 😉
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the voice, the voice..it could be reading the yellow pages
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Lol. Well, it was the voice of a .44 Magnum gun.
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So I’ve got the hots for a gun…Again.
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Thanks Penney!
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Well, this took me completely by surprise. I walked right down a path strewn with multiple clues as to what the poor guy was obsessing over, and missed them all. Lovey, hot, loaded, and surprising, Rose. Bravo!!!
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Well, not everyone recognizes the voice of a Magnum gun, so this was kind of an unfair riddle for most people to try and solve. Lol. A taste of your own medicine, my sweet friend! Thank you. 🌼 🌸 💐
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I’m glad the medicine you dish out tastes sweet…hate that bitter stuff. 🙂
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Excellent piece! I mean, the poem 😉
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Ooooooh, you’re witty!! LOL. Thanks Inese. 😀
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scary gun
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bang bang, baby!
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