Photo by Graham A Stephen (http://geotopoi.wordpress.com)
A clap of thunder woke her from slumber.
She shivered but not from fear.
Raindrops trickled on warm skin –
trailing down her neck and over her breasts.
The warm moisture tingled and teased
her curves and crevices.
Gasping for breath, she sighed his name.
He answered with a low rumble,
and his black eyes roved over her.
Teshub, she called him again
as the mad storm devoured her.
She clung to him, mewling and spent.
Lightning coursed through her veins
as wild winds carried her over the edge.
*Teshub is the Hurrian god of sky and storm.
Photograph by Graham A Stephen (Click here to visit and follow his blog). β€
I like it! It’s both dramatic and erudite. (I’d never heard of Teshub before and had only the sketchiest idea of who the Hurrians were.)
By the way, I’m not sure if you aware of this, Rose, but someone has stolen your hat! When I first looked at the notification in my email, I realized something was different about your picture, but it took me a moment to realize what it was! π
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I love that word; erudite – so sexy!
Lol. I was just talking to Charles (Crow) about how much I missed my hat. So funny!! Thanks BunK. xo
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You’re welcome! π
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Beautiful poem..that’s full of action. Makes me wonder if Teshub had unleashed it on purpose! Also did the thunderstorm take away the hat?
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Haha! Teshub doesn’t do anything accidentally π YES, the storm took my hat — thanks goodness I held onto my blouse! π
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π π
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Moving , beautiful words , tinged, as so often with a sense of loss and losing
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Thanks Paula! The poem was actually written about how it would be like to have sex with a storm god. No losers in this particular poem of mine, for once. π
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I love the idea for the poem
Great piece Rose
To hat or not to hat that is the question
The Professional Cannon
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Lol. Such a clever guy, you are Sheldon! Funny, how my hat is missed by some. π. Thank you!
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What a beautiful poem. I adore this and the images you painted. Lovely work.
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Thanks so very much, Andrew! Here’s a banana to show my deep appreciation. π
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LOL Thanks
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A wonderful blend of emotions and a sense of letting go. The inevitability of sadness at the end. A triumph. As with others, I didn’t recognise you without the hat π
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Haha! Yes, she certainly let it go. π. My hat is alive and well. I just decided to give it a rest. Thanks darling!
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That’s an… intese lover. I didn’t know about Teshub. Thank you, Rose. ^^
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I always learn new customs and see the beauty of your homeland via your photographs. I’m glad to share some new info with you, for once. Thank you so much, Francis π
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Thank you for your kind words towards my person, Rose. Very appreciated. π
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Aw, you’re always so kind to everyone — my pleasure, Francis. β€οΈβπβ
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Actually telemarketing sellers would disagree with your thought. π
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Haha! I think they’re used to people being mean to them. In college, long time ago, I was a telemarketer. I needed a job. So, because of my experience as one, I find it hard to be mean to them. Yeah, I’m no funπ
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Oh, telemarketer. Unfriend and unfollow, hehe, just kidding. xD I think with them I am polite… but in a cold way, but I could be kind. I understand the tension to sell a product (as seen in The wolf of Wall Street xD) but here in Peru they can be very clever to speak for hours, as if they were doing marathon with my mom(I don’t say I dislike to talk to her btw) about who can talk more time on the phone. π
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Lol. I think we have the same mom! π My mom can talk an earful, too. Maybe our mothers should be telemarketers! Haha.
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Hahaha! LMAO
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A clap of thunder…oh! THAT kind of clap. Sorry, haha.
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Oh my gosh! — so glad you mentioned this. When I was in high school, a classmate brought up the “clap” when our science teacher was talking about how thunder is formed. Our teacher told us that in the early 1900’s, doctors would actually tell moms that when babies heard thunder, some would get so freaked out, their digestive system would get out of whack, and the babes would get diarrhea! **True story**
Thank you for taking me down memory lane, Fly. π
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You’re glad I mentioned this? I feel so useful! Haha.
Sure. I believe it. Thunder can cause anyone to have a bowel evacuation — not just infants.
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Thanks bro!
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Storm gods are so smooth.
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Smooth and sexy! Lol.
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A great idea Rose
and a super poem. π
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I appreciate your visits and encouraging comments, dear Alan! β€
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Wonderful use of metaphors…created great imagery. “and his black eyes roved over her”–my favorite line. Great work, Rose.
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Thanks Cathy! I enjoy your dark stories very much!! I treasure your words π
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Thank you…what a wonderful compliment. π
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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So beautiful
Dramatic
And
Humorous
Love this Rummager
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Thanks so much! You made my night. π
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Learned something new! Teshub!
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Always glad to educateπ
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It’s what happens everytime I go visit you, I get educated!
How about that first vampire book way before Baum Stoker’s Dracula?
A gay female vampire?!!! Learned that from you!
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Yay! I’m walking on air today π
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