I feel you watching.
Stalking and always near me –
Phantom with no soul.
*This Haiku was inspired by my shadow.
(Photo by Piotr Lewandowski of freeimages.com)
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Poet Rummager 
Interesting haiku, Rose 🙂
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Thanks Monica! My shadow can be a pest, at times 😉
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😉
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Love the imagery
Great one rose
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Thank you Sheldon!
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So nyc . : ) loved it
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I’m happy you like my nice haiku! 🙂 ✌️
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Most precise definition of shadow I’ve come across so far 👍🏼
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That’s cool you think that. Thanks! 😊
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Wow Rose. . This is a very unique haiku. ‘Phantom without soul’ loved this term. Nice one! Have a beautiful Sunday. 🙂
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Thank you for stopping by, Jackie! I enjoy your positive energy. Have a super Sunday!! 😍
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Thank you Rose 🙂
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An excellent Haiku Rose.
😎😍😎
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Many thanks Alan! 😘
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You’re so welcome Rose.
My shadow said it would never
fight your shadow. ☺️
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Lol. Darn! 😃
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That’s a more powerful haiku than it appears on a first read. Lovely, dark and deep.
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Thanks so much!! My shadow’s very powerful. I wonder if mine fought yours, would mine win? ⚡️🌀🌚
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Nope. 🙂
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It seemed to have more hidden thought than the shadow itself..
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You’ve gotta be careful with shadows. They like to steal and hide things! 😉
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Who’s doing the watching, though? You or the shadow? I like to think it’s ambiguous.
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Yes! Let’s make it ambiguous. I like that!
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invokes
a feeling 🙂
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Interesting haiku! Never trust a shadow.
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You’re right; shadows can be assholes.
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Very interesting…’phantom with no soul’ – perfect!
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Thank you!
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A stalker Haiku
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All shadows are stalkers.
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LOL
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Nice haiku 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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I always welcome the stalking of my loved one. xD
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Lol! That’s always a fun thing; you’re right. 😀
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😀
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So good, as so often if not always!! xx
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Thanks so much! xo
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“Phantom with no soul” – this caught my attention. A very creative way of giving meaning to your shadow..😊 You have that ability of surprise and wonder..💞
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Sorry! Your comment was in my Spam folder 😦 Thank you for your sweet words!! 🙂 ❤
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😍
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Sounds like a shadowy figure. Incidentally, that’s an unusual design on that lady’s blouse.
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Lol! You should see her pants 🙂 👖
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Not sure I dare look. 🙂
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