You’re above me –
so far I can’t touch you.
Yet, I know your dreams.
They scatter in the night –
parallax of light.
When you shine,
no one can look away.
Do you see me stare
and wonder the thunder
that booms in my chest?
Your brilliance moves me.
Clay feet on this planet
affixed by gravity.
Your magnetic pull draws
the world to your door.
Waning moon, stay near.
Don’t keep me in this apogee.
Rock me gently in the night sky.
Point out the celestial stars
as mapped in the ephemeris
so I may make my wish.
Parallax: the apparent motion of an observed object against the background caused by the movement of the observer.
Apogee: the farthest point from the Earth in the Moon’s orbit.
Ephemeris: an almanac which contains the position of celestial bodies in the sky.
(Terms by moonconnection.com)
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Beautiful ode to the Moon… The last stanza is stunning…. As I reas your poem, I thought of Selene, Why was the Greek Goddess of the Moon… 🌛🌜 best wishes. Aquileana
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*who was* ~ sorry for the typo 🌹
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Many thanks for your lovely words, Aquileana! I found your post on Selene and will read it very soon. I may write a poem about her some day soon and link to your blog as its inspiration. Your blog has been instrumental as a source for Greek mythological education and pleasure, as well! All the best, Rose xo
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Lovely👌🏼and thank you for the definitions, I didn’t need them of course 😉
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I was going to write a footnote about you not needing to even read them, but you beat me to it! Damn, you’re good 😀 Thank you, smarty pants. 📚 📖 ❤
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He he, thanks for thinking of me in the almost footnote 😉 ❤
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NIcely done. Great finale.
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Thank you very much 😘
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Dreamy poem with the moon rocking you to sleep. 🙂
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I love being rocked to sleep. Lol. Thanks Somali! 😍🌜🌛
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Gorgeous piece! 🙂
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Thank you very much, Soumya! 🌙😊
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You’re very welcome, Rose. 🙂
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Very nice….only question that remains is your wish?
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Lol. If I tell you, it may not come true 😉
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Another brilliant piece ❤️😘🌟😉
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Thanks Carisa! 😍👄
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❤
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Aw, such a beautiful gif! Thanks darling T. 🌛 ❤ 🌜
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Parallax to a photographer is what was responsible for cutting off the subjects’ heads 🙂
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I never knew that! Fascinating. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving me a little bit wiser. ❤ 🌜
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Thanks for the comment back to me… I am honoured… if you ever want to do a little collaboration, we can schedule that… I have some peeps awaiting and awards too… but I guess we could do something by April… just let me know and we talk… sending love. Aquileana 🙂
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Ooh, okay, let’s do a collaboration in April… I’ll be on vacation the first week of April, so maybe middle of the month. I’ll be in contact. Thank you Aquileana! 🌛 💫 ❤
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Okay, we’ll talk by then… I’ll send You a reminder and we’ll try to schedule it… Thank You , Aquileana 😉😺
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Astronomical drawing! Parallax…apogee…hey! You’re finally using some words that I know! Haha
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Yes, Merrie is amazing! Lol. You’re such a spacey dude — 🚀 🛰 🔭
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Your poem inspires and somehow comforts at the same time. My favorite line is “Your magnetic pull draws the world to your door.”This feels like truth. And what can be more important than truth in art?
To have my doodle associated with such beautiful words, I couldn’t be more pleased. Thank you, Rose.
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You made my day, Merrie! I love your doodles and am floating on Cloud 9 from your kind words. Thank you!! 🌈
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the moon, the moon..never ceases to fascinate us ..your words always fascinate me, xx
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❤️💝💋
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That was a wonderful poem, Rose, but I’ve always really loved the moon, so I’m a bit biased. (By the way, I’m glad you provided the glossary!) 🙂
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I aim to please you!🎯
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Love this soliloquy – to be both read in the literal sense and the metaphorical sense of another being.
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What a tremendous compliment from a poet I love dearly. Thank you, Doug! May you and your Sosta have a lovely night 🌜⭐️❤️
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Thank you. 🙂
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And y’all as well.
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Beautiful Rose
Powerful images
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Always look forward to your words, Sheldon. 😍
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Amazing 🙂
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Are you talking about me or you😜? Lol. Thanks Tracey💋
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You of course!
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Haha!! Ah, you’re so cute. I was only kidding 😀
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Haha I gotcha 😊
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Mesmerizing!
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Thanks Inese! xo
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