Say you’ll stay even if I tell you to go.
There are strings attached to my soul.
They pull me one way and then the other –
like an endless tug of war.
Yanking reason from side to side,
I say things to hurt you –
that’s when I know you’re mine.
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Twisted! I like it, but I wouldn’t fancy being the fly.
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Thank you! The fly? Hmm, is this another take on my poem?
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It reminded me of the relationship between spider and fly: strings attached to your soul, the notion that something is keeping ‘the fly’ there even though it might ultimately be bad for it. It’s cool that it can be read in so many different ways!
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Loved this. The battles of love. “I say things to hurt you –
that’s when I know you’re mine.” Great ending. Perfect for this poem.
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We hurt the ones we love… It’s an unfortunate thing, but it does happen. These battles rage on. Thank you for your insightful comments 😊🌷
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Sad but true. I enjoyed my visit.
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Playing tug of war with plasma will get you burned…
…Playing tug of war with a soul will cause someone to fall in love…right? I hope so.
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Getting burned… Falling in love. Same thing! 😜
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Ha ha. True.
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So if you get angry and say hurtful things but the other person stays anyway, you feel reassured that the person loves you. Is that how it works? I’m really bad at working out affairs of the heart like this. (My wife will vouch for me. I’m pretty useless.)
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I’m sorry, darling. I forget that there are innocent souls who read my dark poetry and don’t understand their meaning. 😃 If someone you have no emotional connection with said that they didn’t care for your bag head, would it hurt more or less if your wife or a good friend told you the same thing?
Have you ever had a petty argument and said hurtful things to someone you cared for and saw the hurt in their eyes and knew (although you’ve always known) it hit home?
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I think I know what you mean. Occasionally, I there have been arguments when I’ve said more than I should have and I’ve been looked up at with tearful eyes.
Of course, then I wish the earth would swallow me up. I hate that feeling. It has been a long time since I’ve felt it, though. It was more common early on with my wife.
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Aw, you make me swoon, my darling BunK with the most adorable bag head! 🙂 xo
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Thank you. I don’t think I’ve ever made anybody swoon before. It makes me feel quite “George Clooney-esqe.” (I wonder if he’d suit a bag on his head. I’m not sure he could carry the look.)
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Lol! Clooney would probably not take anything less than a Louis Vuitton bag, and that would not even come close to the classic ruggedness of your masterpiece. ♛
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Oh, I like the “classic ruggedness” description. I could see someone marketing paper bags to men as a fashion accessory with a slogan like that.
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Well, we’ve found the solution for you to quit that office job of yours! Yay!!!
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Yay! 🙂
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The only ones in life that should be on the receiving end of painful emotions are those worth emoting over. In reality, most of us spend countless time wasting our healthy emotions on those who bring no meaning or value to our lives. Your words are meaningful to me as is your friendship. I like the message.
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Beautifully expressed. Bingo again! Ah, your words move me. Thank you for them and for your friendship. They mean so much. 🌷❤️
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” Some do it with a bitter look,
Some with a flattering word.”
Great poem Rose. 💔
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Wilde and wise was the man, wasn’t he? Thank you, dear Alan ❤ I've made your heart whole again 🙂
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Is there no end to your
Wonderful talents? 💝
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❤️💋❤️💋
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Well all right!
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